Do your characters play well with others? While writing the first draft you can allow your characters to ‘’take over’ your story, but not so in revision.
The second installment
in Lynette M. Burrows’s “Re-vision Your Story,” discusses how to make your character’s goals golden.
Revision is probably the single most difficult thing a writer must do. Lynette M. Burrows calls it re-visioning and shares six lessons on how to re-vision your story.